Hello my name is Taiden and I’m reporting about the club I just visited… the save the children club. Where? Mr. Pockocks room. The save the children club has their meeting every Thursday at 11:00 am. Many people really love this club. They also give out t shirts! The point to the save the children’s club is to support children in growing countries. This helps the children grow up healthy and have a successful life. The save the children’s club is for people who like helping people and also it is for people who are kind and are big lovers of running charities. Please support this club it is for a good cause. Thank you for listening goodbye.
You did a good job of informing us about the club but I feel that there could be some better grammar and punctuation. You shouldn't use "..." in things such as formal assignments even though you are looking at it through a reporter's eyes. Overall you did very good.
ReplyDeleteI feel like you did a good job telling us about the club itself. In the future, maybe you can work on your grammar, like when u said t-shirts you spelled it like t shirts.
ReplyDeleteOverall you did a super job and I hope to see more posts in the future
Taiden you report sounded great it was very detailed about telling us exactly what the purpose of save the children's club is all about Maybe next time you can tell us a little bit more about why people love to be a part of free the children's club:)
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