Finding a club to join? Join robotic club! You
could make any robots u want. Put them together, program it, and play with it. Some
of the good advantages of joining this club is you don’t need to pay, can ask for help anytime, watch people compete with robots
and work with new people. Joining any clubs makes your volunteering scores rise
try to join at least one club. Although there are a lot of advantages there are
some disadvantages too. Such as touching small size pieces and using a
computer. If u are not good at using computers everyone is there to help. One
thing people don’t like is losing pieces. I personally
think making robots are really fun so u should try it. If u have any interest
in joining robotic club, come check it out on Thursday lunch time to room 102. I
also think Leo club is fun to join because u get to volunteer for something
nice. Join robotic or leo clubs!
this was very nice but you used u when it should be you. also i like how you pointed out the bad and nice things about the club. next time you should check your spelling mistakes.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job telling us about the club and what you did in it however you should try not to include shortcuts or internet lingo in your formal writing like "u
ReplyDelete". You used "u" a lot which is something that you should try to change.